Sleeping Valor

Mwaha. I'm back. ^_^ I was unaware of the bustling people surrounding me. A teenage boy, obviously in a hurry to get someplace unimportant [but it must be important if ...

*blink* lol. Okay! Welcome to YWS. ^_^ I will give you the usual new member update: 1) There is a 2:1 rule when it comes to reviews and stories. This ...

Had someone told Johnny that “Can you please take Sandra Tscarediway to 57 Rosebend Avenue?” was a question to which he should answer no if he valued his peace of ...

If by need you mean 'would absolutely love' then I have 3 things you could look at. Diary of a Villain : Prologue

But back I would not go. To me she remains, beaten, lying in the snow. ^_^ Loved it. (Though methinks it is '...remains beaten, lying in the snow.'

Welcome to YWS! ^_^ Before I give you a critique there are a couple things you should know... 1) If you haven't read the rules or just forgot, you're supposed ...

*bows* Thanks for reading. It's been fun. ^_^ Keek out!

=P I won't do another inch by inch commentary, because I don't really see any new issues that I didn't address in my last one. I'd still add more detail, ...

I dunno. I'd say if people say 'I'd like to become a writer' then I'd say it's because they recognize that just because you write and think yourself to be ...

'pitch blackness'

Lightning flashed, the sound of an [you could say 'the' army, since you are talking about a specific one] army's horses beating across the barren landscape. Even with the heavy ...

Lol. Harry Potter's what got me too! ^_^ I eat 600 page books for breakfast now. No cool awards for me though. I'm a little shy when it comes to ...

Welcome to YWS. ^_^ Hope this review helps! You should introduce yourself in the Welcome forum, if you haven't already. ‘The war ended 5 years ago, so why am I ...

I think the others did a pretty good job of summing things up--but I know that no mater how many replies you get, it's always nice to get more. So ...

Far-fetched. We all knew it! We never doubted that the man would fail --[.< Interesting story. You don't tell us much about what the man's supposed to be(but obviously isn't) ...